One of the most common mistakes IELTS candidates make in Task 2 essays is writing weak or irrelevant examples. A strong example can boost the clarity and persuasiveness of your argument, while a poor one can make your essay sound unconvincing. So how do you make sure your examples actually help you score higher?
The key is simple: make your example clear, realistic, and connected to your main idea. Below, I’ll break this down step by step.
🔗 1. Connect to Your Main Idea
Your example should directly support the argument you’re making in the paragraph. 📌 Don’t go off-topic—every sentence must work together to prove your point.
🌍 2. Make It Realistic
An IELTS example doesn’t need to be 100% true, but it should sound believable. 💡 Stay away from “crazy” or exaggerated stories. The examiner isn’t looking for creativity here, but rather logic and relevance.
📅 3. Add Specific Details
Specifics make your essay stronger and more memorable. Mention the name of a country, city, year, or even a public figure. 📍 For example: “In Bangladesh, in 2023…” instantly feels more authentic than just saying “in some countries.”
🧠 4. Explain Why It Matters
After giving your example, always explain its importance. Don’t assume the examiner will connect the dots. 🗣️ Clearly say what the example proves and how it supports your argument
✂️ 5. Keep It Short
Your example should be short and sharp—1 to 2 sentences is enough. ⏱️ Remember, IELTS essays are time-limited, and you also need space for other arguments.
🎯 Putting It All Together
Essay Question: Some people think governments should spend more money on public transport. Do you agree or disagree?
👉 Main Idea: Public transport helps reduce traffic.
👉 Example: In 2023, with the launch of Dhaka’s metro system, more people opted for public transportation, resulting in less crowded roads and a noticeable reduction in car usage.
👉 Explanation: This shows that investing in public transport is an effective way to ease traffic congestion.
✍️ Final Thoughts
Examples are a powerful tool in IELTS Task 2 writing. If you keep them connected, realistic, specific, explained, and short, you’ll not only make your essay more persuasive but also impress the examiner with clear reasoning.
